Chapter 6.15-- Umbra Babysitter

posted 14th Jan 2018, 9:51 PM

Chapter 6.15-- Umbra Babysitter
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view HeSerpenty's profile

14th Jan 2018, 9:51 PM


There you have it XDD.... probably the worst thing you could do to Hizruk without throwing him back in the dungeon.

At least now he can't make things worse!


Sadly I had to update with this sloppy WIP-- please forgive me! My grandmother was rushed to the hospital via ambulance on Wednesday-- I thought she was having a stroke X_X

Thankfully it was just severe low blood pressure that they were able to fix pretty easily and she's home now and doin' okay.

Thanks for you patience!


No longer a WIP--thanks for putting up with me, everyone! <3

view junoro's profile

14th Jan 2018, 11:23 PM


THIS NEW CHARACTER I LOVE HIM. Every grin he makes is EXCELLENT! Also he was just hanging out in a tree, waiting for Merek to summon him? Even MORE EXCELLENT. I want to see more of this guy!

Also wow that sounds really harrowing, Serpy. I'm glad everything turned out okay. I've probably said it a million times now, but if you have to be late on an update due to life wildness, we'll still be here when you get back! This story is really great and inspiring, but YOU need to be in good shape, too! <3

view HeSerpenty's profile

16th Jan 2018, 5:40 PM


Haha I am so happy to hear this! Lol this is Mylon's first scene where he's not swimming in a sea of other Umbras...and I think he did pretty good! While he's tailing Hizzy we'll be SURE to get more of him haha <3

And thank you so much <3. Yea it was very scary and when that kinda thing puts in perspective what's important in life X"D

view Proxy170's profile

15th Jan 2018, 3:15 AM


I know you say it's a WIP, but I actually think it's kinda cool to have that textured background. Kinda reminds me of some older Disney movies where they actually painted the background and characters were in cel format.

So glad to hear your Grandma is ok! She's lucky to have you with her :)

view HeSerpenty's profile

16th Jan 2018, 6:44 PM


Haha saying that about old disney movies made me feel SO much better about this thank u, Proxy! <33

view Vivocateur's profile

15th Jan 2018, 4:11 AM


Here you go! Your very own Umbra baby sitter :D
Lol, can't imagine why he'd be annoyed >_>

Yikes! Glad to hear it didn't end up being serious with your grandmother.

view HeSerpenty's profile

17th Jan 2018, 9:32 PM


Haha ikr? Who doesn't want to be followed around constantly by an authority figure that will report any misdeeds to an even higher authority figure? Especially Hizruk who never does ANYthing to get in trouble! Hahaha

Thank you very much!

15th Jan 2018, 5:04 AM


Sorry to hear about your Grandma, but I'm glad she's OK! Stuff like that is scary.

WIP? looks like it's almost finished, so it's not sloppy, just needs a couple things yet, and being otherwise occupied, well you don't have to be apologetic.

If Hizruk wasn't so pissed off right now, he'd see that Merek really does have his best interests in mind. :D

view HeSerpenty's profile

17th Jan 2018, 9:33 PM


Yea it was suuuper scary--- I'm glad it was a minor problem afterall X__X.

Haha and thank you for saying that X"D--- whenever they don't turn out like I want I always get super disappointed in myself X"D

And that's exactly right! Now nobody has to worry about Hizruk doing something to get thrown back in jail XDDD

19th Jan 2018, 8:38 PM


Looking good now! :D

view Kattapuss's profile

15th Jan 2018, 6:10 AM


Hmmm... I am interested to see how this guy will be.
...But yeah, poor Hizruk. *pats Hizruk*

I'm sorry to hear about your grandmother, and I'm glad she's better now!

view Matt Knab's profile

15th Jan 2018, 6:36 AM

Matt Knab

Just think of it as gaining a party member! :D

view MST3KFan's profile

15th Jan 2018, 9:11 AM


Ooooh... An Umbra shadow!


And it's the OC Umbra I created oh so long ago! What an awesome surprise to see! XD

Good to hear things are going good for your grandma, BTW.

view Mel Cormac's profile

15th Jan 2018, 11:14 AM

Mel Cormac

Be good for the babysitter, Hizruk!

view Jarvi's profile

15th Jan 2018, 11:15 AM


Nothing like personal pain in the ass walking around you xD

view Alicia's profile

15th Jan 2018, 2:22 PM


Haha "first shift." Which means these guys are going to be arguing over who has to take care of the baby next. X'D LOL (I'm just kidding, Hizruk. ILOVEYOU. >_>)

view DLKmusic's profile

16th Jan 2018, 9:45 AM


Sorry bout your grandma, Serpy, but I'm also very glad that you were there to take care of everything! glad she's ok.

regarding the page, I was thinking that this coulda been a whole lot worse, but a little voice in the back of my head keeps sayin...

"Yeah, this isn't gonna backfire or anything..."

I do believe that no teenager in the entire history of teenagers thought it would be a good idea to be followed around by a cop wherever he/she went.

view Seabiscuit's profile

17th Jan 2018, 7:28 AM


Oh boy- Babysitting duty, haha! :D

view JammyTheBirb's profile

18th Jan 2018, 2:43 AM


Glad things turned out alright.

Hehe I didn't notice at first, but he was just waiting there in a tree? awesome XD

view Centcomm's profile

18th Jan 2018, 3:34 PM


glad your gmom was ok.. HUGS.. page is good!

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